- Narrow your research focus on the contribution of animation to education.
- Use a specific subheading, such as focusing on a particular country.
- Consider exploring the role of animation in increasing technological access in underdeveloped countries.
- Highlight the importance of multimedia learning for underdeveloped regions.
- Specify a target group in your subtitle for clarity and precision.
These are the suggestions I received from Nigel for my thesis proposal. They are valuable and will help me refine my research. I plan to narrow my focus to target a more specific group.